Economic progress is one way to measure the success of one country, while some people think there are other factors. What other factors should be considered? Within these factors, do you think anyone is more important than the others?
It is undeniable that strong economy is essential for any country to prosper. However, economic progress alone does not determine the nation's growth and success. I firmly believe that several other factors such as education, health of citizens, low crimes and good environment of the country also decide the success.
To begin with, many countries consider economic growth as fundamental goal, believing it to foster more employment, job salaries and happier citizens. Admittedly, if the economy is strong, there are more jobs in all sectors, and people feel complacent in terms of earning and spending. Secondly, the government too would have adequate wealth for the welfare of the society. In other words, the governing body would allocate funds in infrastructure development and transport networks, providing better life-style to the country-people. Thus, economic growth certainly makes the country powerful.
Nonetheless, it would be unfair if economic development alone is marked as prime reason for country's success. Aparently, other areas also contributes significantly in placing the country high on the globe, and out of these factors, education is indispensable factor which advances any region towards the success. Having more educated people can embolden any state because with knowledge, new inventions and opportunities can be built, creating more jobs and better life. Secondly, sound health and environment too plays an important role. Any country cannot consider itself at top if it lacks in healthier citizens and has an unsafe environment to dwell in. For instance, Brazil has strong economy, still it is not considered successful owing to health and education problems in the country. Moreover, if the administrative bodies do not take steps to mitigate crime in the country then it keeps people in fear and depravity, which is never good. Therefore, all these factors highly count while measuring country's success.
In conclusion, I pen down saying that economic growth reflects country's prosperity, but to measure any country's success, other factors such as education, healthier citizens, clean environment and crime-free cities should also be considered. Moreover, I believe education is prime factor that should be focused more for measuring nation's growth and development.
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1970.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62857142857 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90921688039 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562857142857 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1618241199 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.444444444 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.94444444444 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218013178978 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068979029953 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471826961402 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143337559281 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443117679094 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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