Some people said the government should not spend money on building theaters and sports stadiums. It should spend more money on medical care and education. Do you agree or disagree?
Medical and health care both are the major requirement of everyone in this beautiful planet on the other hand sports and theaters are also necessary because it gives significant amount of rejuvenation to people and it maintain health so both are important.
In this 21st century people have become very busy and surrounded by plethora amount of authorities like social and financial. so they do not get time to refresh their self therefore theaters are one of the place where masses go and watch the movie and get relaxation from there hectic schedule. Moreover sports is one of the thing through which people can mentai their health and government ought to help the person who is good on sports and spend money on them.
On the contrary medical health care is partial and education also. medical services and education both are the thing in which more amount of money should invest by government in order to make people life very easy, good and smart. Among all education is the one of the thing which is necessary for each and every individual and without education we can not get anything. Further more education is the right of every citizen. so more amount of money should utilize on health care and education.
In conclusion government should spend more money on education and health but they ought to spend on sports and entertainment because it is important for everyone
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, in conclusion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1161.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91949152542 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48659144806 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483050847458 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4524593152 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.1 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304137502556 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129799081166 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110008215065 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194577012816 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0841037176531 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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