Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that peopie make? Has this been a positive or negative development?
It is true that new technolog es have had an irfluence on communication between people. Technoloyy hes affected relationships in var ous ways, ard in riy opinion there are buth positive and negative effects.
Technology has had an impact on relatonships in business, education and social life. Firstlyv, telephones and the Intemet allow tusiness people in different ccuntries to interact without ever meeting each ocher. Secondly, services like Skype create new possblities for relationships between stucents and teachers For example, a student can now take videO lessons with a teecher in a different city or country. Final y, many people use socdial networks, like Facebook, to make new friends and find people who share common interests, and they interact through their cempu:ers rather than face to face.
On the ore hand, these developments can be extremely positive. Cooperation between peape in different countries was muCh more difficult when commun cation was limited to written letlers or teleyranis- mond many of us henefit from these interactions, either in work or social Nowadays, inter action s ty emeil, phone or videu are elmost faca-to-'ace cor lexts. On tlhie ollier liand, the availalil ty of new commuicalion technologies ca also have the result af isolating penple and discouraging real interact on. Far exanpie, many young people choose to nake friends on ine rather than mixing with thei peers in the real world, and these 'vrtual relationships are a pcor substitute for real friendships.
In cenclusion, technology has cerainly revoluticnised commuricatior between people, tut not all of the outcomes ot tris revolut on have been positive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37022900763 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97857665435 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.702290076336 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.1613439684 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.909090909 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173053893526 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587198411277 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315543616707 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0940663712418 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293030672146 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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