Some museums and art galleries charge admission fees, while others have free entry.
Do you think the advantages of charging for admission outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
While some museums and art galleries charge an entrance fee, others can be visited for free. This essay support that the benefits of charging admission tickets in this kind of tourist places is greater than the possible drawbacks. This essay will discuss both pros and cons of paying an entrance ticket to this attractions and provide a reasoned opinion.
To begin with, all type of tourist attractions such as museums, zoos and art galleries should charge a reasonable price to the general admission. This is because the value of the maintenance of every single building is extremely expensive and thus entrance ticket incomes are destined for this purpose. In addition, making proper profits means that tourist authorities are able to manage funds to rebuild and improve the quality of their buildings as well as the amenities. One example is the modern Tate art gallery in London where the price of the entrance ticket is destined to build a new hall with plenty of chairs for people to rest.
One of the foremost disadvantages of charging entrance fees in those tourist attractions, is the less number of people that might be encouraged to visit them. Therefore, this might cause a cultural detriment owing to the fact that only the individuals who like this kind of activity are willing to spend money for the admission. In my opinion, I do not believe this could bring a loss in people’s level of culture due to the enormous information that nowadays someone who likes art could find on the internet.
To conclude, although charging fees for the entrance to visit museums and art galleries might reduce the number of visitors, I think that in modern times there are other ways of learning such as using online art web pages. In addition, tickets funds should be invested for the improvement of the tourist attraction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, therefore, thus, well, while, i think, in addition, kind of, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97734627832 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60536090536 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543689320388 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.507823864 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.166666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200234500327 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819877914517 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077633575115 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133070713827 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048285895542 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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