Today people are surrounded by advertising. This affects what people think is important and has a negative impact on people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In current era, most of product sold by its branding and broadcasting. it has both positive and negative impact on even age groups person of region.we shall discuss twice view in following paragraph and give my opinion too.
Firstly, start with the effective point of the advertising. people of country can buy extremely pure quality of product with the compare of others same thing. publishing is the most valuable for upgrade province revenue and generate the job for many people. To add in, some citizen earning up from work in brand endorsement. For illustrate, film star, cameraman, director, set holder etc. earning very much in this business. one of the best thing one could so many option. many others government social publishing influence children to work hard, save water, etc. Further more, it's better for every cast join with each other.
Secondly, plenty of unnecessary questions about it. Like when bad effect on child they saw irrelevant things ,which not to see at this age. And also wrong effect on endorsement of tobacco and alcohol wrong impression for pupils and habited . one of the most who endorse fake product and gave wrong info to all.
According to me, suggestion for changes of times and prohibited for tobacco and alcohol branding. For children lubricants advertise will be show some hours at night. To add in, actors use product first and then influence to use the product.
To sum up, surrounding by apprise encourage to public and make a life ease. Other side small of defect but also remove that by take some steps.
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- Today people are surrounded by advertising This affects what people think is important and has a negative impact on people s lives To what extent do you agree or disagree 11
- Today people are surrounded by advertising This affects what people think is important and has a negative impact on people s lives To what extent do you agree or disagree 11
- Today people are surrounded by advertising This affects what people think is important and has a negative impact on people s lives To what extent do you agree or disagree 11
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98091603053 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49874985007 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.687022900763 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.8464786237 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.25 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0510622436443 0.244688304435 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0134498416112 0.084324248473 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0235138386958 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0254491213145 0.151304729494 17% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0105989570555 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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