Graduation is more necessary for a future career than working experience. What is your opinion?
there is opinion that graduated persons are more successful in career, other people argue, that start job searching better after school.
I think it is more necessary to get a tertiary education first.
Nowadays is one of important thing in human live is getting suitable job. Most of high rated and waged positions on the job market needs tertiary education. In other words you will unable to get a lot of eligeble positions, untill you will be graduated.
In university you can get mo academic knowledges
it helps to find connections with useful people for the future, For example if you study with your classmates , you litterally will be involved in circle of common interest, as you are stydy in the same course, you perhaps will choose the same proffesion. so if one of your classmate is sucsussful in your profession area, he could reccomend you to potential employer.
although, graduation is necessary for employers, some companies more prefer expirienced and skilled workers, than employee with diploma. In other words, there are labour professions where our work experience is high rated.For example electricans should has at least one year as electrician helper, before they could be a general elecrician. so if you will start you career after school it will save you a lot of time, that you otherwice spent on studing.
In conclusion, although working expirience play a crucial role in person's career,the diploma is undenible necessary for a good job, it could bring you more benefits in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, at least, for example, i think, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09163346614 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75733977786 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617529880478 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.0513044383 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.181818182 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8181818182 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21805516 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879886155449 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768960987844 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109550175007 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774228948384 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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