The growth of online shopping will one day to lead to all shops in town to cities closing
Do you agree or disagree?
Can the brick and mortar shops compete with the virtual malls? Despite the massive growth of internet based retail stores, I believe the shops in our neighborhoods are here to stay and in this essay I will state reasons for my view.
The most compelling reason for my view is due the fact that, there is no substitute to the human sense of touch. While there are many commodities we may buy after looking at the pictures or videos, there are lot of products which we prefer to see them in color, dimensions and texture to gauge the experience for ourselves. To exemplify, people like trying variety of shoes or clothing, before swiping up their credit cards. Although the cinematics of multimedia and convenience to purchase in couple of clicks is preferred by many, as human beings, our brains are hard wired to feel physical attributes for items of personal use which is impossible to change in a foreseeable future. Even with the state of art technology there have been many cases of online scams, therefore even the most modern shoppers would at times consider walking down to a trustworthy retail store that gives a personal touch despite of the plethora of shopping portals on the World Wide Web.
Another reason for my opinion is because there are times with all individuals when they need something urgently and waiting for the delivery is not an option. While there is always a faster delivery option available online, situations when there are sudden travel plans or celebrations that may lead us into unavoidable needs. Since planning for every situation beforehand is impossible, individuals would tend to rush to the most nearby market place for their urgent needs, for example food and cosmetics. Market places have always been around for centuries catering to our urgent requirements where most people would find convenient to shop over the counter rather than waiting for few days for the product to be delivered.
To conclude with, I believe that even though internet based websites offer convenience, there are many scenarios where the brick and mortar shops win and may give the best shopping experience to the consumer hence the physical stores would continue doing business as usual and offer a strong competition to ecommerce.
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...ffer a strong competition to ecommerce.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, may, so, therefore, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1877.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97877984085 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5634241 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594164456233 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.7579701629 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.416666667 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4166666667 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113464095931 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416192124974 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435114720862 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0841217286433 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458225729702 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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