Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people nowadays don’t give enough time to helping their communities.
As per an article in times of India newspaper, contribution from yougster towards community services has recently declined. I completely agree to this fact and in the below paragraphs we will state my views.
Nowadays, universities and companies are encouraging their stakeholders to participate in community services, as well as, are organising several programs to benefit the community they co-exist in. However, despite their efforts there is a dip in the contribution of young people due to several reasons.
Main reason for the decline is, high competition in the market. First, young people are under immense pressure to stand out in their feild, as there are a lot others to competing to their position. Secondly, a lot of options available to choose post completion of the education. For instane, after completing masters people are doing several short duration courses such as data science cousre, data analysis, smart professional cource to get edge of other comptetors.
Another point contributing to the lack of young people support is, availablity of entertainment sources. In today's technologically acdvance age there are various social platforms for one to get engaged in. Youngster are addicted to social media and spent their maximum time on it. More option such as virtual gaming and online media service prodivers such as Play stations, Netflix, youtube, so on and so forth are popular amongst this generation.
To conclude, in my opinion, young generation are more distracted than ever from their resposibilities such as towards thier enviroment and community. Therefore, I agree to the argument that new generation contribution towards their community has significantly declined.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 246, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to post'
Suggestion: to post
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 264.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51136363636 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03803700563 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621212121212 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3116051554 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.928571429 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189455489234 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617679388398 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473235117061 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100389308915 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255017861835 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 10.9000537634 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.01818996416 121% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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