Some people find it beneficial to enrol the young children to nursery school before primary school. While others think it is good to keep children with families. Discuss both views and give your opinion
When it comes to sending children to pre-school, many people have a contrarian view. Several oppose this idea, as for them, a child remains protected and acquires basic skills when they are restricted to family members. However, I think nursery school admission for children is not useful if there are no essential changes introduced in the learning system.
In early-age school, the admitted child can get exposure to the school environment. In other words, unlike sending them directly to the primary school, where they find it difficult to adjust to the learning condition; when sent them to the nursery, they develop a sense of academic pattern and operations. Also, they tend to establish rapport and understand the teacher- student relationship.
Moreover, the cognitive development of toddlers takes place immediately when they start nursery. For instance, the facility of blended learning environments like provision of brain development games, physical activities and group tasks enhances the child’s thinking process and perception.
On the other hand, restraining a growing child to family members ensures their protection from the risk of harassment. It is quite possible that a child can fall prey to notorious students' bullying in pre-school which can, in turn, affect their mental health.
Additionally, nursery school fails to provide certain skills to children that families can. Some basic life etiquettes such as hygiene maintenance, the importance of cleanliness, eating style and other important life skills are something which parents can instil among their children in addition to the social values.
In conclusion, in my opinion, it is not advisable to enrol children in pre-primary school unless the school system brings some favourable changes that can protect the child from mental harassment and provide necessary life etiquette to children
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 146, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, as for, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53658536585 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80973241929 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609756097561 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7078050001 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.230769231 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4615384615 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264688094357 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975527777751 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828936078313 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136138885095 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787895119491 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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