TPO 37
In the lecture, the professor claimed that shrimpers should use TED to protect the sea turtle’s population, casting doubt on the reading’s main idea that if shrimpers used TED, they would have a lot of bad effect.
To begin with, the lecture stated that there were many sea turtles were captured by shrimpers. Although a shrimper rarely caught a turtle a year, every shrimpers totally would trap thousands of sea turtles a year. That would be a big problem to compare with losing some shrimp. This questioned the reading’s view that few shrimpers would catch sea turtle and also if they used TED, they would lost a lot of shrimp, so they couldn’t earn money.
Another view of the speaker was that it’s impossible for government to control all shrimpers in the US. TED would automatically monitored them if they used it. Therefore, sea turtle’s population could be increased. This point contradicted the article’s assertion that controlling the shrimpers that they could’t fishing frequently.
Finally, the professor argued that we could modified the nets size in specific area so that some big turtle could escape from the nets easily. With this said, the professor opposite the reading’s statement that because of the nets size, some large sea turtle could’t run out of the nets.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
In the lecture, the professor claimed th...
^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... they would have a lot of bad effect. To begin with, the lecture stated that t...
^^^
Line 2, column 397, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'lose'
Suggestion: lose
...e and also if they used TED, they would lost a lot of shrimp, so they couldn’t earn ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f shrimp, so they couldn’t earn money. Another view of the speaker was that it’...
^^^
Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'monitor'
Suggestion: monitor
...pers in the US. TED would automatically monitored them if they used it. Therefore, sea tu...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... that they could’t fishing frequently. Finally, the professor argued that we co...
^^^
Line 4, column 48, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'modify'
Suggestion: modify
...lly, the professor argued that we could modified the nets size in specific area so that ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, so, therefore, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 5.04856512141 238% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 1.0 7.30242825607 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 30.3222958057 66% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 1373.03311258 79% => OK
No of words: 214.0 270.72406181 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09345794393 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68178705949 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 145.348785872 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565420560748 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 419.366225166 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1040538832 49.2860985944 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0909090909 110.228320801 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4545454545 21.698381199 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 7.06452816374 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.3589403974 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 53.8541721854 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.0289183223 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 63.6247240618 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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