Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world, with serious results for the environment.what do you think can be done to solve this problem?
Removing plants and trees is a globel problem caused by human activities. A sever effect by modren human activities is bringing issues such as pollutuin to air, water and land. Reciyicaling is solution in my opinion for its beneficial results.
Recycling is reusing the prodects that it is been consumed the most, weather it is a nutural source like papers, box, glass or factorical source like plastic. by reusing the prodcts it will be remarkable change in the environment such as an incerese in trees cutting, industrial decereseing sustianable ethical industry and less pollute environment.
Governments should be highly occupied is partcipating in reduceing product. they can support the individuls steps by creating rules that prevent unrecycialing consums.moreover, punich companies who do so. One of the countires who did atchive a huge progress is Kenya.
Kenya manged to turn almost 100% of their waste to useable products in 2017. The government started a three years program in order to reach this top point of accomplishment. Other contries like Finland and Swed and Singabore began to follow similer directions wich is possitive but it can be more.
At the individul level, one's must form changees in his/her daily habits. It is not relaiable to throw your paper waste in plastic bag in paper bin. The plastic intake should be at its minimumest, while making use of it more than once will be even useful. Teaching the children how to use the tissues as simple as it sounds will be beneficial in the long run too.
In conclusion, recycling is heroic saver for the forest life. Every government should work with their citizens side by side to reduce the amount of logging in use.
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- Some people argue that fashion itemes cost too much money. Others say that this is acceptable because fashion is an important part of life. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 56
- Some people think that men are naturally more competitive than women. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- Some people say that TV advertisements have benefits, while others believe the opposite. Discu3both sides, give your opinion and include examples from your own experience 56
- Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world with serious results for the environment what do you think can be done to solve this problem 89
- Due to increasing world demands for oil and gas energy people need to look for new sources of energy in remote and untouched natural places Do advantages of locating these sources outweigh disadvantages damaging such places 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: By
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...d is partcipating in reduceing product. they can support the individuls steps by cre...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'huge progress'.
Suggestion: huge progress
...o. One of the countires who did atchive a huge progress is Kenya. Kenya manged to turn almos...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05319148936 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83650928436 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656028368794 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5909362691 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8235294118 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5882352941 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94117647059 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13525885317 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362503922528 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318205808748 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0608145935665 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326616547604 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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