A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
In this era of dynamism, where everything changes with the blink of an eye, it would be anachronistic to impart education by sticking to age-old concepts and adheres to conventional teaching methods. However, when it comes to elementary education, a standard that neither claims to disrespect any cultural norms nor intends to enforce any belief, ought to be implemented across the country. In other words, when a curriculum is designed keeping in mind the standards that are set, the outcome will undoubtedly be a learning that encapsulates the necessary elements to build a strong foundation for the future. Considering that a child's brain is malleable, it becomes all the more necessary to decide what and what not to impart. But, at the same time, not being introduced to something vital that has roots in the tradition can send a wrong message to the society. I, therefore, agree with the mentioned statement, but with some reservations.
Firstly, if a uniform coursework is taught, it obviates the need to follow multiple set of guidelines. For instance, in India, the Ministry of Human Resource and Development, in association with the Central Board of Secondary Education(CBSE), designs the content that is to be delivered in schools through various pedagogical techniques likeclassroom-teaching. Equal emphasis is laid on other educational inititatives like organizing seminars, workshops, guest lectures, and conducting educational trips. The CBSE drafts the syllabus for every subject after consultation with a panel of experts. These experts ensure the uniformity of the curriculum across schools in different parts of the nation. further, the teachers who are recruited to teach in all these schools are given the same kind of training to teach. As a result, there is hardly any discrepancy in what should be taught and what is actually taught. School passouts find themselves comfortable and confident of their attained knowledge; they emerge as individuals with a strong foundation of principles of subjects like science and mathematics.
However, there are downsides to effectuating a uniform curriclum ( an apparently national curriculum). To begin with, in a culturally diverse country like India, it is not possible to even think of such a structure, let alone implement it. For example, there are students who reside in cities where a large majority of the population converses in regional language; to add to the complexities, there are multiple dialects of the same regional language, too. So, it is unfair and impractical to not incorporate regional language into the curriculum.
In conclusion, while the onerous task of curating the syllabi according to regional preferences is obviated by following one standard curriculum, it comes at the cost of denying a learning exposure to some of the important apects of life.
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- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take In developing and supporting you 16
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take In developing and supporting you 23
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, apparently, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 79.0 58.6224719101 135% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2401.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 448.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.359375 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1731172796 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 215.323595506 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584821428571 0.4932671777 119% => OK
syllable_count: 762.3 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6325997018 60.3974514979 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.368421053 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5789473684 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42105263158 5.21951772744 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0823208958487 0.243740707755 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0251288534375 0.0831039109588 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0241824856669 0.0758088955206 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0477006676235 0.150359130593 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273410166638 0.0667264976115 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.38706741573 116% => OK
difficult_words: 141.0 100.480337079 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 11.8971910112 177% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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