Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
– explain why you changed jobs
– describe your new job
– tell him/her your other new
Dear Jay,
Hope this letter finds you and your family in good health. You will be glad to know that I got a job offer from my dream company as a Software Developer. As you know I was not happy with my current job since I was not able to use my skills and learn something. Besides this, the job as a Software Tester was quite boring and monotonous.
The day I walked into Amazon's office, I knew this is the place I always liked to work. I am supposed to get the customer's requirement and then develop the solution accordingly. Moreover, the working hours are quite flexible as you can leave once you are done your task.
I have one more good news that I have also bought a new car, Hyundai Creta. The car was on my list from the last 6 months, and finally am the proud owner.
I hope to see you soon!
With Love,
Sam.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 113, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'customers'' or 'customer's'?
Suggestion: customers'; customer's
...liked to work. I am supposed to get the customers requirement and then develop the soluti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, finally, moreover, so, then, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 676.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.225 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19530749555 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6375 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 15.7508729917 44.8134815571 35% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.6 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 4.34317383033 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170000106414 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593198348834 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570921724809 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0817118067023 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524198307251 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.9 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.