The best way to solve the world’s environmental problem is to Increase the price of fuel
With the increase of population the use of petrol is raising in their daily lives which is effecting the environment. To overcome such problems people deem that the government should raise the prices which might be helpful but I disagree with this statement because government will face a lot of consequences and it may strike the economy
It is a controversial issue, which the globe is facing now a days, the rocketed adjustment of prices will have deter reaction from people because the prices of petrol have both directly and indirect relation with goods. If the price raised up so automatically the goods and transport will be expensive because all the industries are running on fuel for instance, in my own country (Pakistan) the electricity is produced from petrol if the petrol get high so the electricity also get expensive.
Secondly, it can have negative effect on the economy of a country due to which a country can fall apart. A region is always relied on the taxes so these people don’t pay taxes fairly and even they are not willing to build business due to high expenditures of goods and labors. For example, in my home people are not in mood to pay taxes to the government neither they construct business centers. Furthermore it can affect the revenue which is collected on highways from people because fewer people will ride.
In conclusion, it is not a sustained solution because it can hurt the feelings instead of that the government should make cell or solar cars.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1236.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.828125 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66885794571 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53515625 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.845061336 49.4020404114 222% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 154.5 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 20.7667163134 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.875 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0820399892456 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0313019601506 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424074464779 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0487740858808 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503363551049 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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