Some people think that newly built houses should follow the style of the old houses in the local areas, while others think that people should have the freedom to build houses of their own styles. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The architecture of each house brings many meanings for both personal style and location. While some people believe that newly built house should be constructed as same as the style of more traditional houses in this location, while the others choose a design based on each individual preferences. I do agree with the former idea because of several reasons.
On the other hand, there are strong arguments that new houses should be built in a same design. First of all, in terms of the tangible cultural heritage of a small town or a village, houses with traditional styles and characteristics appear can transmit the traditional of that area. Hoi An is the typical example for this reason which has a reputation for building all houses based on feudal style, making it the tourism hub for many decades. furthermore, construct houses in a same architecture can save the money of the building company when they need to build a large residential area. A lot of real estate companies choose to build resorts with a lot house in a same way so that they save the money for material because they only need to calculate for one house and buy just enough for the whole construction.
On the other hand, many people believe that each individual has a right to build the modern houses as they desire no matter the architecture of houses, which were constructed before. Firstly, by the unique architecture, a house reflects owner’s distinctive artistic taste and personal identity. In addition, since old houses are usually fraught with outdated structures, individuals can comply with contemporary house styles, which are always innovative, technologically advanced. For example, Instead of encompassing traditional styles around, houses nowadays should be built eco-friendly and well-ventilated, not only ensuring the users’ comfort but also reducing energy consumption.
In conclusion, I think we should build have a house in zoning area with house are designed the same because of these advantages is bigger than having a house with individual style.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 444, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
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Line 2, column 662, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a same way" with adverb for "same"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...hoose to build resorts with a lot house in a same way so that they save the money for materia...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, so, well, while, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16216216216 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92121043531 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543543543544 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.904761367 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.230769231 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6153846154 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360733912682 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141908679639 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900281365993 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263908699034 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523901424164 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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