The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Travel, moving from one place to another, for different purposes like; entertainment, study. Some people like to visit individually or lonely, while some may have a habit of traveling in the group. Personally, I believe that the best way from traveling is to travel in a group of people is accompanied by the instructor or tour guide, which I explore in the following essays.
Everyday faced by humans would not be the same. During traveling or visit any difficult place, there is a requirement of some kind of assistance from others. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. Last time, I have visited the Annapurna Base Camp. The pathway for the site is so tortuous, and many hills and slopes have to be passed to reach there. Unless, if there was not any group and guide, I might not have lived now. However, with championed guide and friend, I have walked difficult pathways in the instance of falling snow with the dense forest covered by the trees all around. Also, when there is a company and tour guide, then there would be more enjoyable rather than being alone. Conversely, when someone fell sick during the time of tour or visit, it will be a great company
In some cases, the tour guide really helps to explain the visiting site, which we were visited. When the tour guide explains the importance and all the aspects of the visiting site, it is an opportunity to understand all the details of it. For example, last month, I have gone to Hanuman Dhoka Durbar Square. I have also taken one guide during my visit. The guide points out all the details about the Durbar Square. I could be able to understand the importance of it. He describes and portrayed all the types of equipment and instrument which were used by our ancient king. The tour guide posits the information in a clear way with a very short time.
In my opinion, it would be better to travel or visit with the guide. It is because every human being does not possess all sorts of skills, and they might have to face different challenges and risk during the visit of new places and because it would be a great company when there is a group and the guide.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: Every day
...ich I explore in the following essays. Everyday faced by humans would not be the same. ...
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Line 3, column 613, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a clear way" with adverb for "clear"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
.... The tour guide posits the information in a clear way with a very short time. In my opinion,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, however, if, may, really, so, then, while, for example, kind of, in my opinion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1758.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56623376623 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4310023253 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498701298701 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7564065946 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7142857143 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237505434771 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689737499546 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854997348419 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153229120623 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0912033764439 0.0645574589148 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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