Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social and practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree. Give reasons and relevant examples from your own experience.
Firstly, current people in power tend to divert finance to the diverse events which help them to be prosperous as well as a thrived nation, so a plethora of reasons behind this phenomenon. The rankings of world countries, take for instance, could be a foregone consideration as a culprit of spending the funds on developments in terms of culture. it means that exhibitions, concerts, other ethnical competitions are mostly in attention by government because of the incidence. The aim of diverting a significant amount of the budget, therefore, to arts might one of the cause for the represented obvious example.
On the contrary to the delineated statement, it tends to be involved in rewarding to debate on this issue, respectively a good condition and the sphere of pedagogy which are concerned to be a vital part of human lifetime by performance of country dwellers. They claim that an outstanding bulk of governmental funding must invest into fitness and knowledge in order to be vigorous and qualified person. As an illustration: to the subject Olympiads, scientific researches, labs, sport rates, operations along with its tools. As a result, it is clear why a considerable members of society are prone to gravitate to this point of view.
To encapsulate, from the above-mentioned paragraphs it can be inferred that both attitudes are needed to the states, so I believe that public sector is encouraged to spend the budget equally by policy.
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- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social and practical problems To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons and relevant examples from your own experience 11
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, as a result, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1218.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11764705882 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14538387623 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.8349510929 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.333333333 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4444444444 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5555555556 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.033649470952 0.244688304435 14% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0116805972986 0.084324248473 14% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0145081514569 0.0667982634062 22% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.02510049143 0.151304729494 17% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0129232036188 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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