You need to study climate change. Which aspect of climate change will you choose and why?
The importance of climate change has always debatable has now become more controversial while others reject this notion. The substantial controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate effects my views for favouring the positive impact of the trend and thus will lead to the logical conclusion.
there are myraid of reasons which will further elaborate this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that the people should plant more trees. Consequently, they use of vehicle which create more pollution. Another pivotal aspect of this trend is that they should recycle the industrial water and other biodegradable products which create more pollution . Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.
Elaborating my view points, there are some merits but one of the most crucial information that the we can use the big canals for transportation will make the direction of the canals to utilized to for transportation as we are using sea for transportation. Besides, we can also use big canals to create power implace of thermal plants. Moreover, awareness is also necessary in farmers related to pesticides. They must be banned to burn the crops or husk of crops.
According to the my view point above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of awareness is very important for farmers and masses because they participate to control the pollution are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, moreover, so, thus, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 250.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80603127688 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.583798316 50.4703680194 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4615384615 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0886389302218 0.242375264174 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0289975133694 0.0925447433944 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411049797307 0.071462118173 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0482634904862 0.151781067708 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437196905897 0.0609392437508 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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