Some people think that governments should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and musicians. Others believe that creative artists should be funded by alternative sources. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about whether governments should invest in creative artists such as painters and musicians. Although some believe that it is necessary, I would argue that there are different sources that can support them besides the national budget.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why individuals hold a belief that creative artists should be funded by authorities. Firstly, in most countries, there are talented artists who need to be given opportunities to show their talent through art projects. In that case, they need a huge of money to prepare for, such as the stage, staff, and guests, and the national budget will be their solution. Another reason is that the products of artists may be about the heritage, marvelous sceneries of the country. Therefore, subsidies from authorities are necessary to encourage them and promote this trend to widely spread the morale of natural resources protection.
On the other hand, I would argue that money for art projects should come from both governments and other sources because of some reasons. Firstly, apart from art areas, authorities have other concerns which are, for instance, education, healthcare, and the economy. The national budget should be spent on those areas also to ensure future prosperity or country's standing on the global stage. Moreover, there are various sources besides national funding, for example, through local charities which are supporting art and talented artists. In many countries, foreign support is getting popular. They are willing to invest in art projects which courage environmental protection activities and promote the better move towards environmental sustainability.
In conclusion, I believe that creative artists should be supported financially by both governments and other sources, such as through local charities and foreign supports.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 645, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'resources'' or 'resource's'?
Suggestion: resources'; resource's
... to widely spread the morale of natural resources protection. On the other hand, I would...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77184529046 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.5507792268 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 112.357142857 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3571428571 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321002043471 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11174375 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116666613793 0.0667982634062 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242168876335 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104837895536 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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