Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages.
It is a fact that purchasing things online is prevailing nowadays. This trend will introduce the pros and cons, but in my opinion, the benefits do outweigh the drawbacks.
On the one hand, it is clear that doing shopping online would bring about several advantages. First of all, buying things on the Internet obviously brings people convenience. It means that people only get access to the main websites, click on the products they want and purchase instead of spending their precious time popping into the shops, outfits, books, etc. In addition, the products sold online are almost reasonably priced. Specifically, there are some free discount codes for shoppers to buy things with ease. One more evident benefit which people can get from shopping online is a wide range of stuff being displayed on a lot of websites.
On the other hand, there still exist some noticeable drawbacks affecting to the image of these websites. Firstly, there are negative impacts on your products such as environmental effects, heat,... during the delivery. Secondly, shipping can give shoppers some practical problems with their products including cracking, distorting,...or even delayed. Finally, sometimes the products are mistakenly sent to another person. Thus, the return of stuff are undoubtedly complicated.
In conclusion, there are some minus points to do shopping online. However, it seems to me that its advantages would be more important regarding time saving, better prices, and various products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, thus, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39574468085 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73906402018 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659574468085 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8470916155 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.25 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6875 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16531648407 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455798433969 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445876588704 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0967638563722 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047758168233 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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