Many elderly people are no longer looked after by their families and are put in care homes or nursing homes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
The relative pros and cons of the increasing trend of sending old-aged people in care homes, is a matter of debate. While this trend is beneficial to some extent, I would argue that its disadvantages are more significant.
Many of the families are in favour of putting the elderly people in old age homes as most of the young family members are working now-a-days. so, they have no time left to take care of their elderly parents due to busy daily schedules. Another reason to support this trend is the level of care given by the trained employees of nursing homes to old-aged people as per their needs. This is sometimes not possible at home due lack of knowledge in family members about geriatric issues.
Inspite of all these advantages, the elderly people staying in these nursing care homes are not happy from heart. The reason being that old-aged people always wish to be taken care of by their own family members. They have nurtured their children being parents and expect same in return from them in last years of their life. Also, it has been stated by many psychologists that elderly people stay more healthy when surrounded by their family members. Another drawback is the financial burden on family to fulfill the expenses of old-age homes.
In conclusion, although there are many advantages of putting elderly people in care homes, the disadvantages overshadow them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
... family members are working now-a-days. so, they have no time left to take care of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1154.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91063829787 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47916076865 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 16.5384652654 49.4020404114 33% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.1666666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5833333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.441156928884 0.244688304435 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15694359993 0.084324248473 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799268505919 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266976341511 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0883321817584 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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