A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country.
You have never been there before and need some information before you leave.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
request advise about a gift for his/her family
ask about activities and clothing in his/her country
find out about the food
You do NOT need to write any address.
Hello! I am at pink of my health and hope, you're sailing at the same boat. I have been quite delightful since I have received your invitation to visit Canada. As you know that it would be my first time to go out of the boundaries of my country, so I have a huge curiosity. First of all, please inform me about the liking and disliking of your family as i want to buy some spellbind presents for every family member.
You cann't estimate about level of excitement in me about this journey, so let me apprise with the whole itineray in advance and what sort of activities we would do there. Undoubtedly, the fall is near in Canada, kindly advice me about the type of clothes I need to bring with me.
How you can forget that I am a foody person? Since you know, I am fond of tasting new cuisines and so notify me about the famous dishes of your home Town. Lastly, have you ameliorated your culinary skills or not?
I am anticipating a prompt reply from your side.
Your lovely,
Navdeep Puri.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 44, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...lo! I am at pink of my health and hope, youre sailing at the same boat. I have been q...
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Line 1, column 151, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...I have received your invitation to visit Canada. As you know that it would be my ...
^^
Line 1, column 231, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y first time to go out of the boundaries of my country, so I have a huge curiosit...
^^
Line 1, column 356, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... liking and disliking of your family as i want to buy some spellbind presents fo...
^
Line 1, column 393, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...as i want to buy some spellbind presents for every family member. You cannt es...
^^
Line 3, column 25, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mily member. You cannt estimate about level of excitement in me about this jou...
^^
Line 5, column 55, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rget that I am a foody person? Since you know, I am fond of tasting new cuisines ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, lastly, so, sort of, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36363636364 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38155907237 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5236929583 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1818181818 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232617762029 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093521476071 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487950626794 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128565608787 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691044343838 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.