Your friend has asked you to help him/her to find a music teacher for his/her child. Write a letter to your friend that you have found a suitable teacher. In your letter you should tell.
1. What experience the teacher has
2. Why you think he/she is suitable
3. How to get in touch with the teacher
Dear Simmy,
How are you? Hope this letter finds you in radiant health. I’m writing to tell you that your search for music teacher is end because I have found the best one for you son Dhruvin.
My neighbor told me that her son win the music competition organized in the city last week. All because patience and teaching skill of his music teacher at school. He has also joined the extra classes from the same tutor on weekends. Moreover, he is expert and have great music skills, he chants music and play guitar in the local church, quite popular in the local area.
I think the skills of the teacher will definitely help Dhurvin to gain the knowledge of the various tunes and he will be able to inculcate this art of singing. He can able adapt the career in music industry because the tutor is also have succeed in the field. He has released many religious song in the early years which was very popular but he choose to teach because of the feeling of devotion towards society.
I have word with the teacher during my last visit to Church. His name is Mr Rakesh Sharma and contact no is 00000000. You can call him after 5 on week days and after 1 during weekends and can get the appointment for the visit and demo class.
Hope this will provide you great help!
See you soon
Lots of love
Mannu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 234, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...usic industry because the tutor is also have succeed in the field. He has released m...
^^^^
Line 7, column 239, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'succeeded'.
Suggestion: succeeded
...industry because the tutor is also have succeed in the field. He has released many reli...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 346, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'chooses'.
Suggestion: chooses
...rly years which was very popular but he choose to teach because of the feeling of devo...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 103, Rule ID: NOW[3]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...is name is Mr Rakesh Sharma and contact no is 00000000. You can call him after 5 o...
^^
Line 15, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lp! See you soon Lots of love Mannu
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1080.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 242.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46280991736 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.05926135762 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599173553719 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6752120219 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1428571429 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.28571428571 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348095152482 0.216113520407 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1086372104 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0945313649788 0.0603063233224 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185193421332 0.12726935374 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137321745148 0.0580467560999 237% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.