People in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example.
Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.
Recently, drug addiction is one of the most serious issues that every country around the world have to deal with. Sadly, there is a fact that more and more young people, even only about 10 years old, fall in drug abuse. The reasons and solutions to this global problem will be expressed in this essay.
It is undeniable that parents or the elder, who have authority to use drugs, are the original formation to their children’s behavior. People usually use alcohol or cigarettes as an excellent way to reduce stress and depression in work or life. For instance, a mother drinks wine to forget unpleasant things happened to her. Therefore, her children will misunderstand that whenever facing with unsatisfied situations, he will use alcohol to avoid unhappy stories. Also, surrounding environment affects well to someone’s thought. Many children immerse themselves in drug abuse because of being tempted by bad friends. To illustrate this opinion, one of my friends started using cigarettes after being enticed by his friends. Another reason for this issue is the amount of pressure that children have to face with every day. After day by day, students have to carry on their exhaustion from parents when being not able to get beautiful diploma or disappointment from bullying. Consequently, like I have said before, they will find drugs as a temporary way to relax
The severity of youth drug abuse makes government has to solve immediately. First of all, the government should make strict law to ban all kinds of drugs, especially illegal drugs. Moreover, it is necessary to force farmers to limit every kind of trees are able to make addictive substance such as Marijuana. Putting all addicted teenagers to detox camps is a compulsory work, also, schools and teachers should educate well to others who do not use drugs about the harmful effect of stimulants.
In conclusion, allowing young people to use both legal and illegal stimulants is a bad idea, even unscrupulous. The government should ensure that there are no children have permission to use drugs
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 197, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...no children have permission to use drugs
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08211143695 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72569247568 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8042906263 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2777777778 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9444444444 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177559282577 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520161061585 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434108658795 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113533171519 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413929218251 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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