A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including for food and research.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The exploitation of animals has become a contentious issue these days. There is an increasing number of individuals who believe that animals should not be used in any way; however, others say that animals need to be employed to satisfy several needs including food and research. In my view, animals have to be used to overcome the shortage of food and to gain nutrients that cannot be acquired from plants
On the one hand, some people believe that animals should not be harmed in any way. One of the reasons for this view is that animals need their family members and feel pain as other living beings do. When a mother duck, for instance, is killed, her children, who are heartbroken at the loss of their mother, may find it very difficult to find food. Thus, animals need to be protected from poaching and killing for food so that they can live the life they deserve.
On the other hand, there are other individuals who argue that we need animals for food and to test new medicines on; therefore, humans need to exploit animals for such crucial purposes. This is because nowadays food is scarce and new medicines are being developed. Thus, if animals are not used for food and research, a large number of people may have to die due to lack of food and side effects of newly developed medications. This is why using animals to satisfy human needs is totally justifiable.
In conclusion, the exploitation of animals for various purposes has become a hotly-debated topic. While some people believe that it is inhuman to use animals to satisfy human needs, other argue that animals are needed to be used as food and in scientific research. In my opinion, animals should be employed to fulfil significant needs, such as food, of the growing population of the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...als are not used for food and research, a large number of people may have to die due to lack of f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71521035599 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51558541942 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488673139159 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2417927502 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.076923077 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.524703591468 0.244688304435 214% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.199885861722 0.084324248473 237% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935692719063 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.353704446607 0.151304729494 234% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064900232501 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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