Solving environmental problems should be the responsibility of an international organization rather than each national government. Do you agree or disagree?
the question of who should be in charge of tackling environmental deterioration is open to debate. Some people think international organizations should take responsibility for the improvement in the environment rather than each state. In my opinion, both international organizations and national governments should take action to deal with the problems of the environment because of 2 main reasons.
First, national administrations should allocate the public budget and human resource for handling environmental issues such as water quality degradation at national level in that the environmental degradation affects seriously the living conditions of citizens who directly induce environmental pollution.
Second, it is advised that world organizations take measures to effectively solve bigger problems in the environment field such as climate change, habitat destruction, the extinction of wildlife and the depletion of natural resources at international level. They can help underdeveloped countries improve the state of the environment through financial aid from developed countries and world powers. For example, the environment protecting organization could raise funds to help the vietnamese government solve serious air quality degradation in Hanoi.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that both international organizations and states should play an important role in resolving nature issues radically.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
the question of who should be in charge of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 198.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.18181818182 5.12529762239 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.46960507428 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621212121212 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.8806596761 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.0 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322395499951 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134012825337 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754125573189 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181158161793 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100704689363 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.86 12.4159519038 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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