You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter:
• give details of your visit to the restaurant
• explain the reason for the celebration
• say what was good about the food and the service
Dear Manager,
I am Jot, residing at sector-22b, Chandigarh. I am writing this letter to appreciate your delicious food and wonderful services you offered to us last Sunday at your hotel Shivalik.
I and my friend came to your hotel on November 11th for celebrating my birthday at around 8:00 pm. Many of my friends came from abroad and we have met after a long time. We picked this location because of its reputation and convenient location.
We were ten in number after the cake cutting ceremony we went to your eatery. We really enjoyed the traditional Italian food with the red velvet cake served by your restaurant. It really did worth the money we paid because I assume you have hired the best chief in the town! The service of the waiters was amiable. They were truly well-mannered, organized and skilled in serving food. The most fascinating feature was the interior design of the restaurant.
We also had a feeling that how preciously you treat your customers when I got a return gift which was a small chocolate box as my birthday gift on behalf of the restaurant team. It really made my day.
I hope the authorities of your restaurant will always ensure this kind of service and food to all its guests.
Yours Faithfully,
Jot
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 6, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'jotted'.
Suggestion: Jotted
Dear Manager, I am Jot, residing at sector-22b, Chandigarh. I ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... last Sunday at your hotel Shivalik. I and my friend came to your hotel on Nov...
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Line 7, column 79, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...utting ceremony we went to your eatery. We really enjoyed the traditional Italian ...
^^
Line 13, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to all its guests. Yours Faithfully, Jot
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1043.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78440366972 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64731363951 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628440366972 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1555040086 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5714285714 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26174220591 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783363704906 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708235002451 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139098210426 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493053271141 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.