You have recently missed a project deadline which resulted in your company losing an important
client.
Write a letter to your senior director. In your letter
● apologise for what happened
● explain why you missed the deadline
● tell him/her how you will avoid this situation in future.
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Navdeep Puri, dweller of Huston Street New York U.S.A, currently designated as a Chief Financial Officer in your company. I am inscribing this epistle to apprise you that due to sudden change in the income tax rules and forms, I was not able to keep the respect of due dates. Unfortunately, I skipped the due date of filing of income tax return and
consequently, one of our prominent clients shifted to other Tax consultant.
As prevailing turmoil in the politics and dynamic conditions of economy make constant changes in the income tax act in order to endow relief to clients, thus they altered the whole procedure of submitting returns and provided very trivial amount of time to perform the work with in due dates. Being overburdened with work, the income tax return of M/s ABC Ltd was completely omitted from my mind.
I assure you that this sort of incident would never take place in the future because I have installed a software which would give us reminders about the pending work. Please accept my apologies, I will try my best so that these sort of recklessness would not put a stain in the reputation of our company.
Once, again I regret for my mistake.
Yours Sincerely,
Navdeep Puri
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
..., dweller of Huston Street New York U.S.A, currently designated as a Chief Financ...
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Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...signated as a Chief Financial Officer in your company. I am inscribing this epist...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rk with in due dates. Being overburdened with work, the income tax return of M/s ...
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Line 8, column 223, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this sort' or 'these nulls'?
Suggestion: this sort; these nulls
...y apologies, I will try my best so that these sort of recklessness would not put a stain i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, thus, well, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1027.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77674418605 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62181223681 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646511627907 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.1185406559 44.8134815571 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.111111111 76.5299724578 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8888888889 16.8248392259 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0821923867776 0.216113520407 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383741923523 0.0766984524023 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352686694762 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0349948326995 0.12726935374 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023616706295 0.0580467560999 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 8.37731958763 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.