The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the process of making matches. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
A glance at the given picture provides an illustration of how matches are manufactured.
Overall,it is clear from the given data is that there are 9 phases starting with peeling the skin of log and ending with packaging prepared products. From the given process all steps are linked to each others respectively.
Looking at the information in more detail, the supplied process commences with peeling the logs with the help of blade. Then the logs become veneer and they are sliced by chopper. Once,the chips have been put into the tank is full of with the special liquid which is made from Ammonium Phosphate. The process comes to the next stage in which the products are dried. Next after throwing them to the hopper, tge splints are blowed with the particular contrivance. Then the process is accompanied by sending them storage area with metal duct. And the next step involves inserting the slivers to the perforated steel belt. Afterwards, the sticks are submerged in three different combinations, paraffin wax,based chemicals tank and tip chemicals tank. In the next step they are drained again and this is followed by passing through metall drums. Once the final stage has been completed, the produced matches are packaged.
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... veneer and they are sliced by chopper. Once,the chips have been put into the tank i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05882352941 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58570880849 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607843137255 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8282905303 43.030603864 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3846153846 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6923076923 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.07692307692 5.23603664747 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0662431166317 0.215688989381 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0266947584255 0.103423049105 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328999778901 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0398985897379 0.15604864568 26% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179861828452 0.0819641961636 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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