Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end hunger and poverty, while others say that economic growth is damaging the environment so it must be stopped. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
These days, fostering the growth of economic is the main goal of each nation, which is likely to impact to human’s life directly. While many people suppose that the development of economy could solve the hunger and poverty problem, I argue that economic development is now destroying the natural environment so it is needed to be in control.
On the one hand, there are a variety of reasons why some people believe that the economic progression the only way to end hunger and poverty. The economic growth means that the standard of life seem to be higher. There would be more jobs for the unemployed and people could have more opportunities to get a well-paid jobs. As a result, the wealth from profits will find its way into the pocket of the poor and the problem of hunger might be tackled. This argument made for imperialism.
On the other hand, I would argue that the nature is now being destroyed because of the economic development and there are a number of examples to support it. Nowadays, deforestation is happening more seriously than ever to produce crash crops for export. Fossil fuels and oil used for economic growth is being exploited out of control. Climate change, ice melt, the rise of sea level or the decrease in number of polar bear are also the consequences of industrialization and economic progression.
In conclusion, economic growth which is not sustainable must be stopped and production for human need, not profits, is the straight way forward to end hunger and poverty as well as to save the environment.
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- Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end hunger and poverty while others say that economic growth is damaging the environment so it must be stopped Discuss both view and give your opinion 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'job'?
Suggestion: job
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, while, as to, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83712121212 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75182289946 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55303030303 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4548065104 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.416666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337427295156 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115275121593 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841998562013 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211799710343 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459504050662 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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