In modern times, people are under more stress than ever. This has a negative impact on their well-being.
State some of the causes and suggest possible solutions
So modern and competitive world we are living nowadays that people have to make the best of a bad job. As a result, many find it stressful and frustrat, leading to a decline in their life satisfaction. Nevertheless, there are still possible solutions to tackle this problem.
On the one hand, it is obvious that the working environment tends to become remarkably harsh. Less job opportunities puts workers into jeopardy. To make a living, people have no choice but to work harder. Consequently, many suffer from stress-related issues. Moreover, life is getting busier than ever since people need to complete all of the unfinished work before deadlines, even at the weekend. They are likely to have no time to entertain themselves at all. As soon as no free time is provided, stress and tension are unable to be reduced.
On the other hand, practical remedies can be taken easily. The first advisable relief is that each individual should begin to design a proper timetable on their own. This timetable is capable of helping them find out the best way to balance work life and leisure time. Therefore, the potential results will be relaxation and comfortability. For example, if a person has been working their best throughout the week, they should spend at least a couple of hours on the weekend to take back their inner peace, leaving every single anxious, tiring feeling behind. Additionally, to increase satisfaction overall, it is the government responsibility to create more workplace. Offering more jobs is an advantageous way to relieve people from stress.
To recapitulate, stress mainly results from the merciless workplace and free time shortage. However, it can be solved by the effort to balance things in the life of each person and the act of the government.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun find seems to be countable; consider using: 'many finds'.
Suggestion: many finds
...ake the best of a bad job. As a result, many find it stressful and frustrat, leading to a...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ble solutions to tackle this problem. On the one hand, it is obvious that the ...
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Line 2, column 347, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...than ever since people need to complete all of the unfinished work before deadlines, even ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and tension are unable to be reduced. On the other hand, practical remedies ca...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...us way to relieve people from stress. To recapitulate, stress mainly results f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, at least, for example, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02033898305 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88655562736 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613559322034 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6804614424 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9473684211 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5263157895 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26315789474 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221294758848 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593287670291 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382466360327 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126222188908 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329656582836 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun find seems to be countable; consider using: 'many finds'.
Suggestion: many finds
...ake the best of a bad job. As a result, many find it stressful and frustrat, leading to a...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ble solutions to tackle this problem. On the one hand, it is obvious that the ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 347, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...than ever since people need to complete all of the unfinished work before deadlines, even ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and tension are unable to be reduced. On the other hand, practical remedies ca...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...us way to relieve people from stress. To recapitulate, stress mainly results f...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, at least, for example, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02033898305 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88655562736 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613559322034 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6804614424 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9473684211 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5263157895 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26315789474 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221294758848 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593287670291 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382466360327 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126222188908 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329656582836 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.