There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks.
Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter
• describe what the problems are
• explain how these problems are affecting you
• suggest what you would like the company to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction regarding your bus services problems that we have encounter over the past weeks.
In fact, I have been regular user of your company since I moved here and I have never had this kind of troubles before. Unfortunately, during the last weeks , the some problems started appear.
The first and foremost problem is that your drivers do not follow bus timetable and always come late. As you probably know that there are more than hundred families and school-children in our territory. Being late to school can be accepted by college manager but as a adult ,we can not say same things. This is so distutbing result that affect us and our jobs adversaly.
We would be very grateful , if you give training to your drivers and employees concerning how to manage bus schedule and how to treat customer management.
I look forward to hearing positive respons from you as soon as possible.
Yours Faithfully.
Kevin.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 157, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...re. Unfortunately, during the last weeks , the some problems started appear. Th...
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Line 5, column 164, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...ortunately, during the last weeks , the some problems started appear. The first a...
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Line 7, column 149, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
... probably know that there are more than hundred families and school-children in our ter...
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Line 7, column 267, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...n be accepted by college manager but as a adult ,we can not say same things. This...
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Line 7, column 274, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...cepted by college manager but as a adult ,we can not say same things. This is so d...
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Line 9, column 26, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... adversaly. We would be very grateful , if you give training to your drivers an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, regarding, so, in fact, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96428571429 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71644995279 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.732142857143 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.871794542 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6666666667 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351828684319 0.216113520407 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116333905165 0.0766984524023 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867967709353 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166636810567 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.096312428155 0.0580467560999 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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