Sea otters
The reading and the lecture are both about the decline in the population of the sea otters. The author of the reading feels that based on the investigations conducted at the coastal area of the Alaskan sea it is found that the decrease in the population of the sea otters is due to the environmental pollution and predators. The lecture challenges the claims made by the author. He is of the opinion that the decline of the population is due to predation.
To begin with, the article mentions that by the studies made by the researchers it is found that there is an increase in the chemical pollutants that affects the immune system of the small mammals and it leads to death. However, the author argues that if the decline in the population of the sea otter is due to the environmental pollution caused by the oil rigs then the dead otters should float on the seashore. This specific argument is challenged by the lecturer. He claims that, if the sea otters float on the seashore the predators will eat them according to the predator hypothesis. Additionally, he says that sea otters were disappeared which in turn reduced the population of sea otters.
Secondly, the writer suggests that the population decrease is due to the orcas. In the articles, it is said that seals were hunting the sea otters for their food. The lecturer, however, rebuts this by mentioning that due to the decrease in the population of whales that were hunted by humans, the orcas changed their way of hunting from large species to small species like sea otters.
Finally, the author posits that the uneven pattern of sea otters is due to predation. Moreover, it is stated in the article that the coastal area of the Alaskan sea has an increased concentration of pollutants which leads to the uneven pattern of sea otters at that area. In contrast, the lecturer's position is orcas can hunt the sea otters only in certain areas where the water is huge. The stability of the sea otters is more near the shallow rocky area than the coast.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 326, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... environmental pollution and predators. The lecture challenges the claims made by t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, then, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.4613686534 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 19.0 12.0772626932 157% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 22.412803532 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 30.3222958057 178% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.01324503311 279% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1373.03311258 121% => OK
No of words: 355.0 270.72406181 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69577464789 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60305163261 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 145.348785872 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.408450704225 0.540411800872 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 516.6 419.366225166 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9578491665 49.2860985944 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.1875 110.228320801 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1875 21.698381199 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4375 7.06452816374 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.515406685278 0.272083759551 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.202743860879 0.0996497079465 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.158030766737 0.0662205650399 239% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.348436341621 0.162205337803 215% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121787517187 0.0443174109184 275% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.8541721854 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.2367328918 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 63.6247240618 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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