Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money.
Do you agree or disagree?
Which other types of job should be highly paid?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
A number of people think that film artists, musicians, and sports players are highly paid as compared to other professions. This essay will discuss, why do these occupations have a high-income level. As social media, film industry and TV are rapidly developing industries in all over the world. I definitely agree with the above statement and discuss the reasons behind this.
One commonly cited reason for their high pay is that the entertainment provides relaxation of mind and leisure to the people. As we know that everyone does best to earn a handsome amount to live standard life and, this hard work gives strain to their mind. The tried mind cannot do new and creative things; therefore, it is necessary to give it peace with entertainment such as many people feel relaxed after watching the match or movie and forget their all worries.
Despite this, there are a number of significant reasons for their high pay. As all other industries are linked with these industries and, other industries sale increases with an advertisement of media industries. If a superstar or known player were advertised any product then people would definitely pay that product. For instance, if Pepsi was advertised through cricket or hockey players then people would then that they are powerful players due to Pepsi.
In contrast, entrepreneurs, doctors, and engineers are also highly paid profession, but all these professions need more hard work as compared to the above professions. The economy runs through these building blocks. As we know that if entrepreneurs were taken the risk production then people would eat, wear, and relax. On the other hand, if doctors were not treated the patient then anyone will not feel better. Therefore, these professions also have a high-income level.
To sum up the arguments, entertainers have a high-income level because people spend more money on relaxation and, industries give them money to advertise their product to increase the sale. Doctors, entrepreneurs, and engineers are also having a high income, as they are building blocks of the economy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'industries'' or 'industry's'?
Suggestion: industries'; industry's
...linked with these industries and, other industries sale increases with an advertisement of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, therefore, for instance, in contrast, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15339233038 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77062609962 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542772861357 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0478856943 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0555555556 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162144667991 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535888919709 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409434052044 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956177717615 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261758445829 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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