Families who do not send their children to public schools should not be required to pay taxes that support universal education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Tax which would be encouraged for education system should be exempted with people who send their children to private school. Personally, it is my belief that each citizen should pay tax to enhance educational sector and to participate in own hand, and i will explain why.
Firstly, the government does not force anyone to study in private school. From a practical viewpoint, affluent people would be studied their children in school with a high tuition, so it is crucial to research why they choose it, following that result of exploration should be implemented in public school. Moreover , each citizen should be required to pay tax to fulfill their duty on country as encourage educational sector, and the government managed properly. Furthermore, all people do not utilize service created by taxpayers money. For instance, the vast of people pay a health insurance to state, however they choose private health care in many occurrences. Thus, this is why suggested tax policy for individuals who sent their offspring to private school would deteriorate the whole tax collecting system.
Admittedly, those who sent their next generation in private school help to compose substantial percent in state budget, so the government should facilitate for specific sector in some way. Despite, the specific sector does not educational sector.
In conclusion, each person should have been paid tax without any classification, and struggle to do next step in education system. One day, it cannot be denied that we reap the longest of hard work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23481781377 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79316178041 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591093117409 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4097102639 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.75 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32052115375 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112524578194 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819326786778 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191094613698 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859901944972 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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