Question Authority .Only by questioning accepted wisdom e can advance our understanding,
Humans have always been very ardent creature.We always want to reason and question the standards set by authorities to explore new ventures and perspectives.Yes,I agree that only by questioning accepted wisdom we can advance our understanding of the world.There are manifold instances in the ancient era and the present day era,where humans have shown the grit to challenge the terms and conditons set by plethora of genre of religion,social activities,politics and academics .
For instance ,In India there was a time where having Bathrooms or Urinals in the house itself were looked upon as a social taboo and a issue of religious disgrace.There was this idealism created that it angered gods and made the place of living very unsacred and the person who broke this idealism would suffer gods wrath with only his end to perdition.But such infedility were broken and denigrated by multiple people of the villages and being a social issue it created a wave of clarity that every individual has his rights,and the right to sanitation is not to be looked upon as senile one,as you see today everywhere this has changed ,Social taboos like menstration,gay marrigae and divorce are now looked upon with prsitine views and not the obselete views of unjust and vindictive accustaions like the past.This only happened when such topics were addressed on questioning their authories.
The time where people really thoought calamities like earthquake,floods and tides were just the gods wrath on the people for breaking religious laws ,needed to be attended by scientists and not priests ,in such crisis not accepting whats been said was to be overlooked and scientists really need to asses the knowledge of the sea beds,the positon of the moon,the geological studies,radar and sonar to prove their points .
While erudite personalities like Einstein,Newton,other scientsits they always used the method of questioning,to draw the right conclusions.Only for them we can understand today is the concepts of Gravity ,Theory of relativity,the big bang notion of universe presence and the black hole theory.Only by their true incessant curiosity we have been breaking the stereotyped questions.
As we progress in the future we humans will always have the question why ?and this will take us farther to the endless posiibilities and expectations in our kind.This intriguing nature is what sets us to really know the truth.and helps us reach the apogee of true wisdom.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, so, while, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2065.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 392.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26785714286 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21033484842 2.79657885939 115% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576530612245 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 640.8 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 78.0 23.0359550562 339% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 214.21727288 60.3974514979 355% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 413.0 118.986275619 347% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 78.4 23.4991977007 334% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.6 5.21951772744 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 37.0 7.80617977528 474% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201290257116 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106337809505 0.0831039109588 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109162269882 0.0758088955206 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106337809505 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109162269882 0.0667264976115 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 42.6 14.1392134831 301% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -7.69 48.8420337079 -16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.7 12.1743820225 277% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.47 12.1639044944 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.06 8.38706741573 144% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 100.480337079 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.8971910112 240% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 33.2 11.2143820225 296% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 34.0 11.7820224719 289% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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