The charts below shw information about three different deserts around the world
The charts compare between the size, rainfall and temperature of three different deserts in different continents. Sahara Desert in Africa, Taklimakan Desert in Asia and Great Basin Deserts in North America.
Among the three deserts, Sahara Desert is the largest where its size up to 9000000 sq. km. The Taklimakan and the Great Basin Deserts are having almost the same size 337,600 sq. km and 305,775 respectively.
The Sahara and the Taklimakan Deserts have the sparest rainfall per year, 7.6-12.7 cm of Sahara Desert and 3.8-1.0 cm of Taklimakan. On the other hand, The Great Basin Desert has a heavy rainfall up to 51 cm per year.
According to the average temperatures that are noticed, the Sahara and the Great Basin Deserts recorded the same temperature in the summer: 30 Celsius, while the average temperature of Taklimakan Desert was 25 Celsius. The winter in the Sahara Desert is much warmer than other deserts with an average: 13 Celsius, while in the Sahara and Taklimakan Deserts the average temperature in the winter were -9 Celsius and -8 Celsius respectively.
The highest temperature in the Sahara and Great Basin Deserts recorded in the summer are 58 Celsius and 57 Celsius. It seems that the Taklimakan deserts has a harsh winter because the extreme temperature receded in the winter was -26.1 Celsius.
Overall, the Sahara Deserts is the biggest, the Taklimakan Deserts is the coldest and the Great Basin has the highest rainfall.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 965.302439024 126% => OK
No of words: 240.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07916666667 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62432200239 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4125 0.547539520022 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 368.1 283.868780488 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2660793972 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.583333333 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16077432921 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858035936082 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701683987369 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113695158796 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777971570405 0.0819641961636 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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The charts compare between the size, rai...
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... Great Basin Deserts in North America. Among the three deserts, Sahara Desert i...
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...7,600 sq. km and 305,775 respectively. The Sahara and the Taklimakan Deserts ha...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...a heavy rainfall up to 51 cm per year. According to the average temperatures th...
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...9 Celsius and -8 Celsius respectively. The highest temperature in the Sahara an...
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...ceded in the winter was -26.1 Celsius. Overall, the Sahara Deserts is the bigge...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 965.302439024 126% => OK
No of words: 240.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07916666667 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62432200239 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4125 0.547539520022 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 368.1 283.868780488 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2660793972 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.583333333 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16077432921 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858035936082 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701683987369 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113695158796 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777971570405 0.0819641961636 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.