Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is the fact that the climate change is the serious issue which need to prevent it together. However, some people think that despite stopping it, humans should find other way to survive with this problem. I completetly disagree with the point which is preventing climate change and living with it.
Climate change is the issue which was caused by human greed throughout historical event such as deforestation and pollution. In some decades before, the population in all over the world is not as many as today, people did not need to have more place to settle and live. Due to the overpopulation nowadays, however, the green places have cut down to build more buildings. Furthermore, people need to earn money to live their family. Therefor, it is a significant increase in factories and companies openned to create more job opportunities for people. However, some factories and companies destroy the atmosphere and the environment by chemicals or toxic trash. It pollutes the atmosphere and the environment, hence the climate was changed every day.
If people will not have some suitable actions, it will be a serious issue. Thus, people need to act together to save the world. Planning trees is an example, if every people try to plan a tree in their life, it will be millions trees saved. Millions trees which will be saved in the future means it will decrease the lack of oxygen and make the condition of the world better. Moreover, the governments need to close some factories and companies which harm to the environment by some environmentally harmful chemicals. People, besides, need to provide information to save the atmosphere and the environment where they are living in.
To sum up, I always believe that preventing climate change and improving the environment is responsibility for every people entire world. People should help the Earth by their way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, as to, in fact, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01607717042 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75760921027 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520900321543 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4698527689 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.6666666667 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2777777778 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211229424442 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730149337893 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541794964383 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149334262433 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685076950838 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.