More and more people today are becoming overly dependent on the internet and phones.
Is this a positive or negative development?
State-of-the-art technology has dramatically impacted the lives of people. Nowadays, many people greatly rely on the internet and phones. I believe it as a positive development.
To begin with, the supporter of negative development deems that the dependency of people on the internet and phones has ruined their health. The people relax in their free time using their phones and by using the internet instead of doing any kind of exercise which leads to eye weakness and obesity. Furthermore, it weakens the bond between the family and friends because people like to spend time with their online friends rather than meeting their peers physically. For instance, earlier people use to sit in the parks with neighbors and friends to spend quality time but now parks are occupied by dogs and birds for nesting.
However, in my point of view, this latest technology has made study easy as one can easily surf the internet in order to get information about the topics with certain clicks. Apart from this, one can get a lesson from online tutorial classes which the biggest advantage for the students. Furthermore, one need not travel a long distance to meet near ones because the application of video calling and group calling has made easy to interact with each other while sitting at home. Moreover, this technology has given a chance for many people to become famous and popular. To illustrate, the applications like unacademy are there which guide students for every kind of topic and the applications like TikTok and youtube has given a platform to youth to expand their talent and become famous.
To conclude, nonetheless to say there are some downsides to the latest technology but its positive aspect is that easy communication with a friend sitting in other corners of the globe and getting information about every topic while sitting at home.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 498, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...hysically. For instance, earlier people use to sit in the parks with neighbors and ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, moreover, nonetheless, so, while, apart from, for instance, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01948051948 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61860663169 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542207792208 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1178330128 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.923076923 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161150535355 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681477814934 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722153141579 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882274788874 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427312993721 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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