Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree
Due to globalisation, many languages are disappearing from the world every year. Many experts believe that this issue is not crucial, and life would be better if there are only a few languages in the globe. I strongly support this view, and I will justify my opinion in the following paragraphs with relevant examples.
There are many advantages to having only a few languages. The most significant benefit is that communication will become much easier. That is to say, if we have only one or two languages, everyone will learn it and communicate in that language. People will be able to travel anywhere they want without worrying about language hurdles. It would also increase tourism as people who were afraid to travel internationally because of language barriers will start exploring the world. For example, many people are afraid to visit China as they do not know Chinese and most of the Chinese people do not understand other languages.
Furthermore, another benefit of this trend is that doing business will become easier, and there will be higher chances to grow it. This is because if there are no language hurdles, people will be able to market their product to the globe in a single language. It will save their money which they used to spend on the translation of advertisements in different languages. To illustrate, many British companies rule the world because they do not face any language difficulties, as English is a global language which is spoken by most of the world.
In conclusion, it is evident that there are numerous benefits if we only have one or two languages in the world. People will be able to communicate with each other easily, and it will also help businesses to flourish.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, for example, in conclusion, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94845360825 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76065458389 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505154639175 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.96864205 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325215803168 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115132558793 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655694549592 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212282684177 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469694305009 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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