In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
In the last century the number of cars has increased. However, there are people who believe that in the next twenty years could be decrease them. I agree with this statement commuting time, sustainable life, and reducing cost of life. In the following paragraphs I will support my ideas in this issue.
First of all, commuting in big cities is became a huge issue for people. More specifically, public who go and come back from home to work take them many hours every day. At this point, big cities are working in figure out how it could be a better solution on this issue. One of the things that they are working is in commute by train, subway, or bus. Those public transport reduce the number of vehicles that people need to use to go work.
Second, in the last years, people are turning to a sustainable life. In order to obtain this goal, they prefer to use fewer cars. Furthermore, instead to have several cars at home, they are changing for having one car, and planning better the schedule day. Thus, if there were less cars in the word, it would lower environmental contamination.
Finally, in the past the cost of life was cheaper than it is nowadays. Since people try to figure out how they could reduce expenses on the budget, one suggestion is reduced highest cost. Of course, vehicles are one of the most expensive expense on home budget, and reducing the number of cars in every house, clearly it will reduce expenses.
In conclusion, I believe that in the future the number of cars will reduced because commute is becoming an issue for big cities, second; people are ending up in a sustainable life, and finally life is turning more expensive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 42, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...irst of all, commuting in big cities is became a huge issue for people. More specifica...
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Line 3, column 425, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
... number of vehicles that people need to use to go work. Second, in the last year...
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Line 5, column 278, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun cars is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...r the schedule day. Thus, if there were less cars in the word, it would lower enviro...
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Line 7, column 167, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'reduced the highest'.
Suggestion: reduced the highest
...penses on the budget, one suggestion is reduced highest cost. Of course, vehicles are one of th...
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Line 9, column 69, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'reduce'
Suggestion: reduce
...t in the future the number of cars will reduced because commute is becoming an issue fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, thus, in conclusion, of course, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 295.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66779661017 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42192418297 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532203389831 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3554278088 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3529411765 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76470588235 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175930858045 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052854192951 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491805038939 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0953437997526 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464915926819 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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