Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this modern era, Half of the population think that learning via history is difficult. however, many may said that history is the store of knowledge to learn about every individual's lives. I strongly believe that history is a part of our life, and have huge amount of useful information.
Firstly, In this devolping world people's living style has been changed, everyone looks further. In other words, humans are moving faster for their comfort and rapidly increasing their facilities by researching on new things, Consequently, A person finds it harder to learn about past from comfort-zone, and stuck in advancement. For instantiate, recent studies showed that who are keen about their future, they suggested that learning from ancestor is not worthy, and there are no benefits seen in study.
On the other hand, A lot of histories earth has from the beginning, Whether it is art or places. From the ancient time art has been consider as a vary valuable thing, it demonstrated the world in the form of sculpture, that trend has been following by everyone. In general, old places contributed in the it, some countries have so much historical places. For example, India has an huge history and there are so many building which is made by some famous person, thousands of years ago the building are still like it is recently made. however, the texture on it has meaning in it's own way.
To concluded, people are getting addicted to new technology and it is impacting minds. Nevertheless, To gain knowledge because every part of history has it own meaning that enhance adaption and boost the strength of brains muscles. In my opinion, learning from past is a great idea there are a lot of profits we can see, that affect our life in a positive way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, still, for example, in general, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87666666667 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65387557273 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8157482661 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2142857143 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243804387737 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698015946022 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591959921982 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134407891214 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318430943534 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.