Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
We humans are considered to be the most evolved species that has laid its foot on the surface of earth as we have evolved through various stages using the past events. There are a number of people with a belief that the past life has no effect on today's human life and there are others who believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand the same. I will discuss both the views and give my opinion at the end.
There is an understanding among certain set of people that past cannot help us to ponder upon present human life. For example, there are numerous things which people experience in today's world that were never thought of coming into existence. For such new events various persons are pushed to their limits and are forced to think out of the box without any past experience available.
The other school of thought which says past is a valuable source of information which helps human to understand life in a better way. For example, there are a plethora of such instances were people recollect or go back to their past experience in order to derive at a number of conclusion. Past experience of testing various drugs or medicine have brought a better understanding of human body to the present generation. Using this epitome of information scientist are creating better medical resources in order to tackle various biological diseases. Considering the highly coveted advancement in medical field we can say past experience or history is precious asset to mankind.
Hence, after discussion on both the opinions I can conclude that the availability of historic information is of great help to understand present and future life. Also, there might be a number of instance were past experience could be of no use.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85953177258 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63767880349 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511705685619 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5428299447 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.769230769 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46153846154 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330162160257 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116752371713 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900580640733 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204887873312 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.087735639098 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.