Some people believe it is better to train children in the city while others support bringing them up in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Use relevant examples or personal experiences.
Some schools of thought are of the opinion that it is more beneficial for children to grow up in a metropolis while others are of the opinion that being trained in a rural area is better. In this essay, I will discuss both views and give my opinion.
On the one hand, bringing up children in a city has series of benefits. Children that are trained in cities are opportuned to attend standard private schools and are opened to advanced forms of learning. For instance, During this Covid-19 Pandemic, some private schools in Nigeria have resulted to teaching their students online to reduce idleness. Furthermore, Children living in cities also get the chance to participate in extracurricular activities such as Joining educative clubs and engaging in other activities that enhances learning.
On the other hand, Children growing up in the rural areas might not be opportuned to attend private schools. For Example, The only schools available to children living in the Makoko slum in Nigeria are public schools that are not well equipped for learning, which results to the students learning under harsh conditions. Also, some parents or guardians living in villages do not believe in education, instead they prefer to send their children to work on farms or learn a vocational skill.
In conclusion, children brought up in urban areas are exposed to modern forms of learning while children living in the countryside are not opportuned to attend standard schools. Therefore,In my opinion, training children in cities has more benefits than in villages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15354330709 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72819874389 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527559055118 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5698855528 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8181818182 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273555980648 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116232531705 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697413186222 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189462138146 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.087830997105 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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