You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment.
In your letter,
describe the problem with the equipment
explain how this problem is affecting your work
say what you want the shop or company to do
I am writing to complain about the laptop that I had purchased from your Apple Store in Tracy, California on 24th May, 2020. It was a Macbook pro 2019 with a 13 inch display.
Since I work from home, my device is a crucial part of my profession. However, the enter key has stopped working today and it is causing me distress. I had to send an urgent email to my client but due to the faulty keyboard, I had to borrow my brother's laptop to finish my work, which was already delayed. This is completely unacceptable, a company like yours should check their devices properly before selling them to the customers.
In the view of what has happened, I would like you to contact me as soon as you recieve this letter. As the equipment is still under one year warranty, I would want Apple Store to send a technician to fix the device or send a replacement at an earliest possible opportunity. Additionally, I would like a written apology for the inconvenience caused.
If you have any question, feel free to contact me. Looking forward to your response.
Yours Faithfully,
YOYO
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 115, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'May 2020'.
Suggestion: May 2020
...pple Store in Tracy, California on 24th May, 2020. It was a Macbook pro 2019 with a 13 in...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 80, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...crucial part of my profession. However, the enter key has stopped working today and it is...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 242, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...fix the device or send a replacement at an earliest possible opportunity. Addition...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65284974093 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72780089857 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658031088083 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1230238962 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8333333333 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0833333333 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208006911063 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705272064122 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394359343781 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106155871091 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219659836015 0.0580467560999 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.