Some people say that art (e.g. painting, music, poetry) can be made by everyone whereas others believe that it can be only made by those with special abilities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
A host of people assert that only by talented artists can art be created, however, others maintain that the ordinary people can also produce a magnetic work of art. This essay will discuss both of these views.
On the one hand, there are two main reasons why arts dedicated to those who are caliber. Firstly, it is admitted that those who are gifted can produce artworks in higher quality. Sculpture, for instance, although anyone can play with clay and make uncomplicated products, forming an extremely sophisticated statue is a combination of imagination, creation and innate skills that only distinguished artists can produce . Secondly, exclusive skilled individuals will have an extraordinary view to portray norm objects. Picasso, for example, the most renowned artist in the 20th century is a quintessence of violating the rule of prosody by founding the cubist painting which is different from the other.
On the other hand, a myriad of people claim that even the norm can produce art. Firstly, as all people have their imagination and creativity, they can make pieces of art in daily life. For example, it is not difficult to encounter a video in tiktok that dexterous users will give specific instructions to audiences to make a model especially houses by using bamboo toothpicks. Moreover, should individuals devote a lot of effort, they will also create arts. For instance, only when persevere in practicing for long hours, can untalented individuals play a musical instrument beautifully.
Generally speaking, in my point of view, not only can people with uncanny abilities can produce arts but usual people also tend to do it
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15730337079 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83492474057 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614232209738 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6146672505 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.923076923 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289954729418 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983177300216 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789585389585 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201441165365 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602085992211 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.