The internet has many disadvantages as it does advantages. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
The 21th century can be considered the era of technology with the strong development of internet. Internet is becoming an important role in our modern life. The internet has both advantages and disadvantages but I believe that it has more advantages than disadvantages.
When the internet appears, our life seem to be more easier. There is a huge source of information on the internet. With a click, people can find out the information which they want to know. Students use the inernet for serving their studying. When they have a difficult excercise, students can find the key on the net. They also study foreign languages by this way. They browse to youtube or other websites to study. It is really a good thing. Our work becomes more comfortable thank to the internet. Employees send email to other companies or to their customers throught the net. It is so fast. In the past, people have to travle for a long distance of meeting and now they can sit in their company and call video instead. This way can help them avoid the risks on the way to the meeting place. When you have relatives or friends who study abroad or live far from you, you can keep in touch with them by sending email, chatting or calling video throught the internet. So, you less worried about them. Using internet as a tool for entertainment is not a bad idea. Internet is also uses to earn money for many people who do not work in a company. Morever, you are too lazy to go out and buy something, you can sit a home and order things you want online. A shipper come to your home and give it to you.
On the other hand, internet also has some disadvantages. Although there are many informations on the net but not all are correct. People have to check it carefully and be sure that the website we look at are reliable sources before using. The internet is highly addictive. Many people are becoming lazier because all their activities depend on internet. They think that without internet, they can not do well.
In short, although the internet has some disadvantages, they are not terrible. The internet make our life easier and it is a part to create our modern life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...as more advantages than disadvantages. When the internet appears, our life seem...
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...e internet appears, our life seem to be more easier. There is a huge source of information ...
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...e net. They also study foreign languages by this way. They browse to youtube or o...
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...come to your home and give it to you. On the other hand, internet also has som...
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...thout internet, they can not do well. In short, although the internet has some...
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...it is a part to create our modern life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so, well, in short, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1764.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58181818182 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54264886456 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511688311688 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 16.0721442886 187% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7818956151 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.8 106.682146367 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.8333333333 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22656185772 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581529550593 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493030509846 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142145855165 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508005500495 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 13.0946893788 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.3001002004 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 12.4159519038 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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