In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as
completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning
and taking responsibility.
What are your opinions on this?
In some nations, children are involved in different types of paid jobs. Although people view this act as improper, others see this gaining an invaluable work experience interms of learning the skill of responsibility. This essay will shows that this is totally a wrong act and unfair to children, as this can be seen as child abuse.
Children getting paid employment is not right and this can be viewed as a child abuse. At a very tender age, these children are not mature enough to handle the physical and pyschological stress to deal with the daily activities of a paid work. When these children engage in paid work activities they are denied the right to their compulsory education, they can get injuries from working, which can be very detrimental to their health and they are highly vulnerable to being sexually abused by their employers, all these incidents are unjust to children and are seen as child abuse. For instance, according to the 2019 report from the World Health Organisation, 90% of children who are in paid jobs, suffer from consistent abuse frim their employers and other individuals who patronise them.
However, some will argue that children will learn how to be responsible by engaging in paid work and it is indeed a beneficial work experience for them. In other words, they will learn to be punctual to work, to work as a team, to engage in individual tasks and so on.This, however can be learnt in their respective schools and from their parents.
In conclusion, children should not engage in paid work because it is simply not the right step to take to being a responsble person. Furthermore, the act of children engaging in a paid job can be seen as an outright child abuse.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 235, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'show'
Suggestion: show
...kill of responsibility. This essay will shows that this is totally a wrong act and un...
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Line 5, column 269, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...to engage in individual tasks and so on.This, however can be learnt in their respect...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80677966102 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65078243451 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48813559322 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.820224034 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.909090909 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8181818182 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310407537571 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144944346689 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709786590886 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223187476524 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0815444579862 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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