Some Companies Sponsor Sports As A Way To Advertise Themselves. Some People Think It Is Good, While Others Think There Are Disadvantages To This. Discuss Both Of Sides And Give Your Opinion.
Moving toward the 21st century, a large number of people are nowadays expressing a deeply growing concern about the advertisement of companies in sports. Some hold firmly to their belief that some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. However, others argue that there are disadvantages to companies.
There’re two main views that some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. First of all, it’s well known the fact that advertisements in sports can help companies have strong access to audiences who are following these sports. The most obvious example to prove is that audiences automatically remember the logo or company branch in their mind without watching a piece of a daily advertisement on TV. And there is no doubt that the sponsor spending is much cheaper than an advertisement on the gold time frame on TV. The companies will have a better image in the audiences’ minds.
Even though some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves but there’re two main points that some companies sponsor sports will take disadvantages for themselves. First and foremost, it is commonly accepted that some companies don’t receive a lot of benefits from this supporter act. A clear example is found to prove is that they don’t approach the exact audience who have real consumption of their products. And there’s no denying that almost the audiences don’t care about detailed products because they see only logos or branch of companies. Their most focusing is what happening in sports matches.
In conclusion, it’s my strong belief that companies should combine both sponsors and advertisements on TV or other channels to have the best effective result so they can deduce spending and increase volume.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 33, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
Moving toward the 21st century, a large number of people are nowadays expressing a deeply...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, so, well, in conclusion, no doubt, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24210526316 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85751938776 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4159950046 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.714285714 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309064552918 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11498804271 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109431844921 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201861785558 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646770694487 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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