Write a letter to the principal of a college in which you got accepted and say that you
cannot start your course. Please include in your letter:
- Which course had you applied for
- Why cannot you start
- Ask about the future courses availability.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform you that I shall be unable to join the ‘Diploma in
International Business programme’ in which I got accepted in your college.
Unfortunately, I met with an accident and have been advised complete bed rest for three
months by my doctor. Last week I went to visit my relatives in Ambala City and as I was
disembarking from the bus, the driver started the bus and I fell sideways on the road. I
suffered from a fracture of my thigh bone for which I got operated and my doctor says
that if I take complete bed rest then I shall be up and about very soon. Otherwise such
fractures can be very irksome.
I would like to enquire when the next intake for this course is because I would really want
to do this course in your college as it is the best recognised for this course. It would be
very kind of you if you could adjust my fee for the next session which I shall join.
Thank you very much for your attention to this request!
Yours faithfully,
XYZ
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-06-29 | Anjanakanal D | 76 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 74, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Otherwise,
...then I shall be up and about very soon. Otherwise such fractures can be very irksome. I...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, then, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51926648077 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.1855970515 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 16.8248392259 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.29896907216 279% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277532989159 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11108008813 0.0766984524023 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848271621266 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0922353109314 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074628695349 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.54 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.